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Post by Rainwhisper on Sept 27, 2008 20:52:04 GMT -5
The Battle (by Rainwhisper)
War Cries, Claws, Screeching,
They all fill my ears,
I try to cover them, cowering in fear, My white pelt shining in the moonlight, I'm shaking, I let out a whimper Suddenly, I'm flying downhill, feeling like I'm
F A L L I N G
Clanmates all around me, rush home, victory cries fill the air, No one notices a small kit sneaking back towards the nursery,
Nobody except my mother.
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Post by Frozeneye on Sept 27, 2008 20:59:16 GMT -5
Love the poem, Rainwhisper! I could really imagine hearing the battle.
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Post by Rainwhisper on Sept 27, 2008 21:03:31 GMT -5
Thank You! I GOT A COMPLIMENT!!! YAAAAAAAAY! ;D ;D ;D ;D (ahem) sorry about that, I got exicted....
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Post by Tapecat on Sept 27, 2008 21:09:45 GMT -5
Great poem rainwhisper!
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Post by Echopool on Sept 28, 2008 14:33:16 GMT -5
Yeah! TTLY AGREE!!!!
Echopool
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Post by Frozeneye on Sept 30, 2008 17:04:05 GMT -5
So wait, it's about a kit who gets scared from the battle cries? That's clever!
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Post by Echopool on Oct 9, 2008 19:38:46 GMT -5
Ingenious.
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Post by Essences of Dark Dreams on Oct 9, 2008 21:09:42 GMT -5
GREAT poem Rainwhisper I LOVED IT!!!!! I wish I could to that
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Post by Rainwhisper on Oct 10, 2008 20:05:20 GMT -5
It's not THAT GOOD!!! (stop complementing me! ) JUST KIDDING!!!
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Post by Frozeneye on Oct 17, 2008 14:59:14 GMT -5
Of course, you could always ask for more, couldn't you Rainwhisper? jk
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Post by Rainwhisper on Oct 17, 2008 17:22:44 GMT -5
Yes I could... NOT!!
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Post by Frozeneye on Nov 5, 2008 20:02:59 GMT -5
Evrybody chek out the poem i entered for the contest! (sry 4 advertising in your thread, rainwhisper)
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